I sent an early version of Chapter One of Prophecy's Queen to Alyssa & Leslie at The Writership Podcast for critique.  

As expected, they were pretty harsh.  It's OK, I have a thick skin and I value all comments, positive or negative.

I agree with some of it and I disagree with some of it, and that's OK too.

Thank you ladies, for your effort and feedback.  Best of luck with your project.

I thought you guys might like to read what they had to say, and listen to the podcast.

The Writership Podcast - Prophecy's Queen